Chittering 3

I'd like to get another line in, so please don't write him going inside already.

He's there to work. He's staying out.

Just wanted to make sure.

*nodnod* I'm glad you did; 's useful.

Unless you want Nico to overhear them and interrupt, we can assume Weft will go indoors. Or I can edit to say that specifically; that might finish the scene off better. Up to you!

Should/can I remove everything but the first sentence, then?

Uh, not unless you want to? Yes, he ignored it, but she can always ask later.

She's bought a lot more than an egg's worth of answers.

I think I would. :)
She wouldn't add another question while he's choking on his water, and when he's so surprised he chokes, it sounds odd to delay that reaction.

Do you think she has?

Up to you.

FINISHED, WOO!

Whee! *flops*